I am a Year 8 student at Glen Innes School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Mrs Raj & Mrs Parker
Wednesday, 9 November 2011
My awesome firework weekend.
Wow! It's fireworks day. All my family were waiting for it to become dark to light up their fireworks. We all looked outside to see if it was dark so we could light our awesome fireworks. After that, we heard a big loud firework from our next door neighbor. So we all got our fireworks and we started with the small one and then big ones. Finally, it was finished. We still heard noises from every where but we just went back to sleep.
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Sounds like you had fun with your family Edwina.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used your learning about recounts to write this post in sequence.
Mrs B