Tonight we float our beautiful flax rafts
After all that we share wonderful kai
Resoluting we make, to have a great year
In the night seniors read a story
Kai is delicious!! YUMMY food!
Ice cold it is, in the dark night
Seven brothers still searching for,
Seven sisters to be their hot wives
Still searching but never found them
Puffing and Puffing
Sweating and Sweating
Never gave up
Came to an end, found all the wives
Celebration was on
Never stop the smile and the happiness
Edwina
WOW! noice what a great piece of writing you've written. You got a lot of adjectives so that's a good sign.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!;)